Bitter Prophecy by S. Tilghman Hawthorne

 

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The moon’s silver glow bathed the town of Silar with a cold light. One sleek pale ray stole through Merrith’s window to caress her soft cheek. She slept with the careless abandon of innocence, wrapped in the knowledge of her warm, safe world.

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A World of Worlds

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The latest and very exciting anthology from Grey Mouse Publishing! I’m excited to report that my story, Bitter Prophecy, is among the delightful concoction of Sci-Fi and Fantasy in this grouping. Get it while it’s free from Smashwords at https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/423591

Please join other readers in sharing your comments below. Which story(ies) did you like best? Why?

Many of these writers have books available, do look them up! 🙂

Critiques: What Can They Do For ME and How Do I Get One?

As writers we love to get some feedback on our new works once we’ve polished them up a bit. Submitting your work for critique and giving critiques to others is a great way to learn more about the craft of writing and to network with other authors.

What can a critique do for me, you ask? Critiques can be as simple as finding those typo’s and misspellings that your eyes can miss (and that spell checker can miss too!)
But they can also be in-depth and:
•   look at the overall style of your writing
•   look at the “meaning” of certain word choices
•   consider the  choreography of your phrasing
•   note dialogue vs description
•   watch for the flow and clarity of phrasing
•   consider the overall pacing of the story

Learning how to critique the works of others not only allows you to support your writing community but can also give you great insight into your own work.

I’ve created a forum called Writing Talk where you can get your work critiqued! The Forum has boards for writing discussions, challenges and prompts but it also has a restricted board for getting critiques.

The Critique board is accessible by password only – this means your work is safe in a private place – not in a public board where anyone passing through can see them!!

Please come and register for Writing Talk, introduce yourself in the Welcome Board and tell us about your writing, then see what the Forum has to offer!

I hope you’ll come and take a look. I’ve worked hard to create this in order to support my fellow writers and could really use some support and feedback on this!!

Would you like to have a safe place to get feedback? Would you commit to giving feedback to others as well? Please leave your ideas, comments, suggestions in the comments below!!

Writing Talk

A World of Possibility – An Anthology

  My story, A Step in Time, has been published in A World of Possibility. (Pg 238) I am so delighted and proud to have been included in this wonderful Anthology – available for #Free download at Smashwords and on Barnes and Noble, Kobo,  iLibrary for iPad, iPhone and iPod, and for your Sony Reader!

I do hope you’ll download the book and read it. There are many fascinating stories in it by up and coming new Indie Writers who need your support.

If you get a chance to read my story I would appreciate a review that mentions it and my name as I will have a novel coming out soon (Legacy of the Medallion). Thanks for your help and support!

To leave a review, go back to the place you downloaded from and leave a review on that page, OR leave it in the comments below!

If you’re an author with a story in A World of Possibility, please feel free to comment and leave some info about YOUR story too!

Read my Review on Goodreads!

Here’s a little Preview:

A Step in Time
Stranded! Out in the boonies with a dead car and no bars on his phone, Grant has no choice but to start walking. He comes to an old farmhouse and meets Miss Lula, an elderly lady who tells him its a bad night to be out, the spirits are moving through the trees. Surely you can hear them?!

Miss Lula grows more animated as she tells Grant about her young fiance and how she still awaits his return from World War II.

She introduces him to their music, their dancing, and the spirits that inhabit the night.

 

 

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